ardystic's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Secret message]

i liked it

very simple but i liked the style. you made -100 fps looked good.

[A Gift to the Face]

great short

that was a good one even though i knew what was coming. i thought "hmmm, that gift maker looks a lot like a cannon. i wonder if he's gonna -- yep. there it is."

StickDinosaur responds:

Haha it's funnier when you say it

[Left 4 Bed]

lol

rape is only funny when it's over the top.

Sh0T-D0wN responds:

"Over the top"?

[School Project]

good

you had some nice animation going on in a few places. most notably the mouse and red scarf.

foolishcharacter responds:

Thanks, I like what I did there too, but even then the mouse just kinda 'disappears' of the screen. I barely made the deadline with this, and I didn't have a lot of time to begin with. Now that I can do this on my freetime, I hope to create some more intricate presonal driven projects.

[Tarboy]

AMAZING!

the animation, the style, and the music were fantastic. the story was awesome and i got that feeling that ran through my body when you see something epic at the end when the janitor held up the tar jar. great way to lead into a sequel. can't wait for tarboy's revenge. you guys make a one hell of a team. i especially loved the light effects.

[The white box short]

you had something goin

shame you didn't keep goin. it looked like you were going to get into a "animator vs. animation" type deal which is always interesting because you can get really creative with how your figures interact with the environment. not too bad for a first submission. at least i could tell this had some thought and effort put into it unlike some others i've seen.

tips:

-instead of using a song, sound effects would've been much better since you animated explosions.

-text color should've been darker. blue and green are close in value so it was a little hard to read

-use easing for your tweens. it would help create a sense of gravity when objects drop like when your character was dropping his weapons.

christolilov responds:

Thanks for your review, I appreciate it.
Truth is I didnt make it longer and with sound effects because I got lazy...
Just wanted to know if someone likes the idea and my animation style.
Since its obviously still here and even got a relatively good score for a 50 second crappy flash Ill make a second version of it.Longer and with effects...

[laSALSA: Verde]

i was about to blam this

i thought this was just a cheap advertisement for you and your friends' user pages but then i found the play button. i think you should make it a bit more obvious next time.

i thought the art style and artistic expression was great. very "artsy." i liked it.

[Johnny McChimp]

good

i thought the art was good but i wish you stuck with the outlines. the things that i really liked about this were the subtle details like the chalk lines including the blood splatter and the wig on the judge's afro.

[Deathsponge Notepants]

belongs on youtube

sorry. i just don't approve of these kinds of flashes. all it is is a video in swf format. if i saw this on youtube i would've given it a good score but imo, this doesn't belong here.

even though i'm voting low, i liked the idea of combining death note and spongebob. the clip selection fit nicely with the audio. only draw back was the low quality and the bad choice of text color because the subtitles disappear in some areas.